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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

This is a great drawing, with nicely balanced out colors that just pop at the viewer of the art, and the contrast colors look great together! I love how Monster Kid is looking up in wonder and joy as he walks with your character!

I only have a couple pointers, and none too big, so don't fret!

The rain, for one. The droplets are one giant line all the way down. Perhaps next time you can separate them into smaller segments a little more spread out -- like real rain. It's not all one giant stream from the cloud! This style of rain still looks good; this is just a suggestion!

And then the background is kind of blah and empty. Maybe add a small echo flower or a couple "stars" near the top. Then it won't be so empty -- but don't attract the watcher's attention to the background. Just give it a little flavor in case they choose to let their eyes wander elsewhere than the front and center.

I really like your cute style, however!