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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

I like the fries, they look pretty good, and you did a great job with the ketchup covered ones. The bottle also looks good with the little tomato on it.

But you could put a little ketchup still in the bottle, maybe sticking to the sides, because there's always just a little left. This, however, is just a minor detail, which doesn't distract attention from the main picture.

One thing that does distract attention is Sans' nose, or lack of one. Now, some of the time sans can go without having a nose, but in this photo it really directs the viewers attention to that detail. Now, if you're having trouble drawing a nose, try just a little carrot ^. Or you could do a little upside-down heart, which looks pretty cute anyways. But right now, no offense, it looks a bit creepy.